The Race
by
A short, light hearted contemporary fantasy tale, presented for consideration in the Lunar Awards. “The Race” first appeared in The Rabbit Hole - Vol 7 - Not From Here anthology, October 2024.
(Read Time approx. 12.5 Minute Read)
The shining planet Mars hung like a crimson god in space as the tiny ship darted in like a needle in the dark — at long last, the race was almost over. Colored in splendid red and blue, the one-man vessel screamed through space as its hull was pushed to the limits of endurance, placing the engines under stresses the designers wouldn’t have dreamed of in their worst nightmares.
Lisa Drake adjusted the controls of her ship with the care of a master artisan, as she allowed herself to savor a moment of glory. Her scanner remained relentlessly fixed on the only other object in the entire solar system she cared about, the steady blip that remained four thousand kilometers behind, but ever aching to close that gap.
“You can wipe that smug grin off your face, Lisa,” came a voice which, despite being transmitted over a tiny speaker, still managed to hold all the bravado of a matador bowing to his adoring fans. “You haven’t won this one yet.”
Her grin widened at the sound of his voice. “What makes you think I’m smiling, Jacques?” came the coy remark, as she glanced back at the scanner and ran an almost fond hand across the blip on the screen representing the source of the taunt.
“I’ve known you far too long, ma chérie,” he replied, a light chuckle adorning his French accent.
“Yet you still haven’t learned that you can’t beat me,” she said with a laugh, while taking another reading of the bright red planet which totally filled the view out her window. “Territorial claim of Quad M761 is in the bag for NORAMCO.”
“My employers back at EUROFED wouldn’t like that,” he said with renewed determination. “So, I’m afraid that the claim will have to go to me.”
“Give it up, Jacques,” Lisa warned off her competitor. “You know the Free Trade Commission’s rules of territory. Whomever puts their signal rod in the Quad first gets all territorial rights, and I’m a good four thousand kilometers ahead of you.”
“It’s not over until it’s over, mademoiselle,” Jacques said as he chuckled with renewed conviction. “I have one or two tricks left.”
Lisa eyed the scanner for a moment, silently judging his threat. She had been at this long enough to know one should never underestimate a competitor. But then her smile returned as she realized even the master pilot, Jacques Fortuné, would be hard-pressed to catch up to her now. She was set to go into her mandatory orbit around Mars before descending to the site, while he was still some way off.
“Sorry love,” she said with a hint of disappointment, realizing the thrill of the race had already surrendered to what she now assumed was a forgone conclusion, “there’s just no way you can catch me. That deposit of Qinlarium is as good as in the hands of NORAMCO.”
“Would you care to wager on that, Lisa?”
A playful glint sparked in her sea green eyes. “The usual bet, I assume?”
“But of course,” he responded with his typical roguish flair. “A night out in the glorious city of Paris, verses your dismal New York.”
She raised an eyebrow in amusement. “You didn’t seem to mind it last time.”
“Did you beat me last time?” he asked with apparent confusion. “You must have remembered it wrong.”
A warning beep from her navigational computer alerted her that playtime was over, and she had to start earning the claim reward she had already spent in her mind. Releasing the automatic controls, she firmly grasped the flight stick and began to flatten her craft into a tight orbit of the red world, keeping as close to the planet as her heat shields allowed.
“We’re going to have to finish this planet side, Jacques,” she told him while concentrating on the navigational readings flashing across her computer screens. “I’ll be waiting for you down there.”
“I was just going to say the same thing, Lisa.” Then the communications went dead, as her ship arced around the horizon of the planet, disappearing into the night side.
Lisa watched as the planet started to get between them and his blip disappeared from the scanner. She concentrated on the tight orbit, realizing this was his one chance to catch up to her, since a wide, sloppy orbit would cost valuable time. She locked the atmospheric window into her controls. Nighttime began to yield to brightness as brilliant spears of light marked her orbiting back to the day side of the planet. With her stabilizing orbit completed, she aimed her sleek craft for the window that would allow her to safely penetrate the planet’s stratosphere to get down to the surface.
The NORAMCO spaceship bucked a few times as the slim craft sliced through the thin atmosphere, its heat shields glowing a Sunfire red as the pristine planet vainly attempted to refuse the uninvited intrusion. The stratosphere finally gave way to milder air as a flash of light, kilometers off to her right, drew her attention away from the computer readouts.
“Holy—” was all that escaped her lips as the realization of what her competitor was attempting sank home. “That suicidal idiot,” she whispered as she checked her readings to be sure of what she was seeing. “No one lands without a stabilizing orbit, Jacques!” she yelled into her communication speaker, as she watched the trail of flames that surrounded his small craft. “You’re going to fry.”
But no answer came as his craft began to spin furiously, trailing a thick purple cloud of smoke. She bit down hard on her bottom lip as she internally winced, waiting for the explosion that was sure to follow. But as suddenly as it had flared up, the craft abruptly cooled down, as the EUROFED ship pulled into a level descent, kilometers ahead of her.
“You were saying?” Finally came the response that had her grinning in relief, despite the tactical advantage she had just lost.
“You could have been killed,” she scolded him. “It’s a miracle that your ship didn’t burn up.”
“Ah,” he said as he chuckled, “but miracles are what make me a great pilot. Now if you will excuse me, I have a race to win, and a quad to claim.”
Lisa’s eyes narrowed in determination as she judged the lead his craft had on hers. They were still over a hundred kilometers from the quad that had been staked out as the only deposit of Qinlarium detected on Mars, and she wasn’t beaten yet. She knew both of their crafts were roughly of the same speed capabilities, so simply trying to catch him would be practically useless, unless a miracle happened.
“It’s time to make a miracle or two happen for me as well,” she whispered to herself, as she scanned the computer navigational data, looking for the loophole she needed. Then she spotted it. The quad lay at the end of a narrow canyon that was too thin for a ship to pass through. She could see Jacques’ ship was already heading over it, which would cost him time. She gauged the width of the canyon and gritted her teeth as she pulled hard on the flight stick. The flat craft to banked onto its side, entering the canyon with less than a meter to spare on either side.
“Lisa!” Jacques called out over the communication line, “have you lost your senses? You’ll never hold that vertical dive through the canyon at top speed.” His voice softened as the slightest tremble edged through the speaker. “Please, ma chérie, pull out before you slam into the canyon wall.”
However, she ignored his pleas as her concentration was riveted to the high walls to either side of her hurtling craft. Beads of perspiration dewed on her brow as a cramp formed in her hand. She held on to the flight stick dearly, as her muscles formed into rigid marble, holding the ship firmly on its path, despite the fantastic wind currents that threatened to slam the craft into either wall.
The bright sunlight struck her face as she cleared the canyon and righted her ship, a breath of exhilaration escaping her lips.
“Don’t ever do that again,” Jacques demanded, his voice still shaken.
“Can’t take a taste of your own medicine?” she scoffed with forced pretense, despite her own decision to take his advice to heart.
“That’s not fair.”
“Sorry, love,” she said while finally letting out the breath she had been holding. “But this race looks like it’s over.” Her lips curved into a huge grin as her craft cleared the rise that surrounded the quad, and she fired the breaking thrusters. With a roar of heat and a flurry of scarlet dust, her ship settled onto a corner of the two-kilometer-wide patch of land deemed Quad M761. Grateful for the chance to stretch, she quickly sealed up her space suit and grabbed the signal rod that would send the communication of legal claim back to the trade commission on Earth, letting them mark off this quad as belonging to NORAMCO. Stepping into the airlock and sealing the ship, she opened the outer door, taking her first look at the surface of Mars.
The sky was filled with scarlet dust from her harsh landing, blotting out the distant sun, and everything else. Hearing the roar of Jacques’ ship coming in, she quickly jumped out into the dust with the claiming rod and prepared to end the race.
As suddenly as the dust had appeared, it vanished away, cleared by the firm Martian winds. With a soft cry of victory, Lisa plunged the rod into the pliant ground, prepared to activate the signal...and stopped. There was another ship right in front of her. It was roughly the same size as hers but was of a design she had never seen before. She almost forgot Jacques’ ship landing behind hers, as her attention settled on the glowing rods that were placed in front of the foreign ship, clearly territorial markers.
Then the ship’s door opened, as three people emerged from the strange vessel. However, people was clearly not the right term, Lisa realized, as she watched them exit their ship. Although upright, and also in environmental suits, they were unnaturally tall and thin, almost like stick figures, and as they approached, she could see gray triangular faces through their oval helmets, as large golden, multifaceted eyes stared at her.
She barely registered Jacques’ presence next to her, as she stared in disbelief at the first aliens ever viewed by human eyes. But she felt his hand on her shoulder, and she turned to him, searching for some hint of control in his eyes.
The lead alien stepped forward and motioned to the glowing rods around its ship.
“We have claim here,” he said in a voice that sounded like it was coming out of a vocal enhancer.
“You speak English?” Lisa asked, the reality of her situation finally sinking in.
Jacques glanced at her with confusion. “He was speaking in French, Lisa.”
“Actually, you are hearing what you want to hear,” the alien stated in his metallic voice. “We adjusted our translators to all your languages.”
“How thoughtful,” Jacques grumbled as he deactivated his claiming rod and tucked it in his belt.
It was this simple movement that caused the ramifications of the alien’s presence to sink home to Lisa, as her face turned into a sour frown.
“But our claim...the Qinlarium for NORAMCO,” she stated to the alien, her voice still a bit shaky.
“We saw your ships heading here,” the alien admitted, “and realized that we had to beat you to this location to stake our claim, since you Earthlings are so territorial.”
“You raced us to this quad?” Lisa asked in disbelief.
“I’m afraid so,” the alien admitted, as his multi-faceted eyes focused on both Jacques and her simultaneously. “What you call Qinlarium will not belong to either the North American Corporation, or the European Federation. It is ours by your own laws of fair trade.”
“But it’s a vital new fuel source,” Lisa protested, hoping to salvage her claim. “This is only the second place that we’ve managed to find it.”
“I’m sorry,” the alien replied softly, “but it is vital to us as well.”
“In what way?” asked Jacques.
“We eat it.”
Both earth pilots stared dumbfounded at the alien. “You eat it?” they asked together.
The alien nodded, seemingly happy to share this information. “We’d share the Qinlarium, but there is only so much for our people.” Upon reading the total looks of dejection on the faces of the Earthlings, the alien took a deep breath. “However, we still wish to get to know your people, have our two cultures mix.”
Lisa and Jacques stared at the alien in silence for a moment, then at each other.
“I had big plans for that money,” she groaned quietly.
“As did I,” Jacques agreed sadly.
“Maybe some other time,” Lisa told the alien with a sigh as all interest went out of everything other than a speedy return to Earth, to pick up another territorial assignment.
“Likewise, mes amis,” Jacques added with a halfhearted wave.
Then both turned back towards their ships and entered them silently, the bounce lost from their stride despite the lower Martian gravity. The lead alien turned back to his companions and shrugged, then walked back into his own ship.
Neither pilot said a word as they started up their ships, and lifted off, slowly pulling away from the crimson world. It wasn’t until an hour later, as both ships leisurely headed back towards Earth, that Lisa received a communication from the EUROFED ship.
“I will miss having the opportunity to entertain you in Paris, Lisa,” he admitted sadly. “But perhaps we will race again soon.”
Lisa let out another sigh as she activated her end of the communicator. “All that way,” she grumbled, “and some bug-eyed aliens beat us to it.”
“A most unfortunate event,” Jacques agreed. “But hardly our fault.”
“Do you think the trade commission will believe us when we explain why we never sent in a claiming signal for Quad M761?”
“I do not know,” he answered quietly. “But what a spectacle those aliens would have caused back home.”
“That’s for sure,” Lisa grunted almost absently, then laughed. “First contact...can you imagine all the commotion and press...”
“...and endorsements,” Jacques added thoughtfully.
“...and contracts,” she added as well, her lips suddenly getting dry.
Both were silent for almost a minute, each of their thoughts a whirling hurricane of possibilities.
“The contract rights to them would be enormous,” Lisa finally broke the silence, as she licked her lips in anticipation.
“Worth millions,” Jacques agreed.
“I can’t wait for our night in New York,” she said with a grin.
“You mean our evening in Paris.”
Both gunned their engines as the two ships spun back towards Mars, accelerating them to top speeds...the race resumed.


This is a really cute, and funny sci-fi story. I love the chemistry between the two main characters, and how the aliens are just like, “yeah…. we just won your game, lol”
I also really enjoyed this except:
Lisa and Jacques stared at the alien in silence for a moment, then at each other.
“I had big plans for that money,” she groaned quietly.
“As did I,” Jacques agreed sadly.
(Like same guys)
I really enjoyed The Race —it's a spirited, fast-paced tale with charm to spare.
I noticed how seamlessly the story blends classic sci-fi aesthetics with a flirtatious, almost rom-com dynamic between Lisa and Jacques. Their banter isn’t just entertaining—it adds stakes to the race without needing villains or violence. That balance between competition and camaraderie is rare and refreshing.
I also noticed the clever use of subversion at the end. Just when the reader expects a triumphant flag-planting moment, we’re met with an alien claiming, “We eat it.” It’s a brilliant punchline that turns colonial ambition into cosmic comedy.
As a fun creative suggestion—I noticed how distinct each ship maneuver was, and it made me wonder: what if each pilot’s flying style visually reflected their personality even more? Lisa’s smooth precision versus Jacques’ theatrical recklessness could mirror a dance—almost a ballet in space.
Altogether, this is a confident, clever short story with real personality. Looking forward to the next adventure.